ON WRITING FANTASY: The Plot Thickens
“Plot is what the characters do
to deal with the situation they are in.”
— Elizabeth George
“The beginning of a plot is the prompting of desire.”
— Christopher Charles Herbert Lehmann-Haupt
“Character is plot, plot is character.”
— F. Scott Fitzgerald
What happens next?!?
In this third installment of an ongoing series I’d like to talk about the role of “Plot” in Fantasy Fiction. (Previous installments covered Originality and Style.)
On the surface, Plot sounds extremely simple. And it can be. But what is it exactly? Basically, it’s nothing more than What Happens. Plot is a series of events that follow one another in a logical order. Although sometimes that order can be intentionally mixed up to create more dramatic tension (ala Tarantino’s PULP FICTION). There is an art to writing a good plot, to being original, to rising above the recycling of “stock plots” and tired formula.
So what is the secret of writing a great plot? One word: CHARACTER.
Fitzgerald said it best: “Character is plot, plot is character.” This is a sentiment Alan Moore also echoed in his writings about the craft of writing. Another way of saying this is that Characters Will Follow Their Desires. When you have a well-imagined setting all you have to do is drop some well-imagined characters into it and let ’em go. Like scientists dropping mice into a little maze. What do the mice want? The cheese at the end. So they run and run and run until…Voila!…they solve the maze and get the cheese. (Or run themselves to death, if the story is a tragedy.)
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The Ladies of Mandrigyn, by Barbara Hambly
Science Fiction and Fantasy Artists of the Twentieth Century: A Biographical Dictionary, by Jane Frank


Science Fiction author Norman Spinrad, author of Bug Jack Barron, The Void Captain’s Tale, and the classic Star Trek episode that introduced the world to cigar-shaped starships of death, “The Doomsday Machine,” talks about the cruel math of “order to net:”