Chapter 25 of Lawrence Block’s Telling Lies for Fun and Profit (which should be on EVERY writer’s bookshelf) is titled, ‘First Things Second.’ As he succinctly summarizes (nice but unneeded alliteration there), “Don’t begin at the beginning.”
It’s a popular screenwriting maxim to enter the scene as late as you can. In other words, don’t begin at the beginning. I seem to recall William Goldman espousing this.
Block tells of being advised to switch the first two chapters of a detective novel he had written. Basically, this put the reader in the thick of the action from the outset, with some explanation following. Tension can be created at the outset and carried forward by not beginning at the beginning.
Sitting here at the keyboard, I can’t think offhand of a Sherlock Holmes or Solar Pons story that uses this technique. There’s a reason we’ve all got the image of Holmes and Watson sitting in their rooms at 221B Baker Street when a client or Inspector Lestrade comes to visit and we’re off on a case.
As I read this chapter, I thought of Will Thomas’s Barker and Llewlyn books (love them, but what’s with the two “L”s at the beginning of that name?). Barker has more than a passing resemblance to Sherlock Holmes (I suspect that Robert Downey Jr’s portrayal owes a debt to these books) and Llewellyn is his Watson (or Boswell). Mind you, they are excellent books and not simply Holmes copies.
I went over to the shelves and pulled out To Kingdom Come, the second book. And there it was. You want to grab your reader’s attention?
I was falling through an indigo sky. I remember the wind whistling in my ears and my coat flapping about my knees as I plummeted. My head hurt, and as I gazed up into the remote, star-studded vault of the heavens, I was having a little trouble piecing together exactly how I had gotten there. I felt as if I’d suddenly fallen off the edge of the earth and would hurtle forever, but the logical portion of my mind told me that all this falling must ultimately end. Unless Parliament had suddenly repealed Newton’s law of gravity, I was eventually going to strike something, and it wasn’t going to be pleasant.
Thomas cleverly has Llewellyn figure out that the bridge above him indicates water must be below and he’s headed for it. He finishes the intro with, “In effect, before I died, I wanted to solve my own murder.” This scene, which wraps up on page 3, resumes on page 248. BOOM!
The next book, The Limehouse Text, opens with Barker in a Jean-Claude Van Dam-ish Oriental pit fight (curiously similar to a scene in Downey’s Holmes movie: made a few years later…).
Then we move backwards to find out how we got there. I highly recommend the five Barker books by Will Thomas. And a sixth is due out in May!
So, give some thought to not beginning at the beginning. Grab your reader with action right out of the gate. Establish some tension. Make them wonder how the characters got to that intriguing point. Then go back and tell them.
After all, as the Bible tells us, the last shall be first and the first shall be last. That book has sold pretty well.
Bob Byrne founded www.SolarPons.com, the only website dedicated to the ‘Sherlock Holmes of Praed Street’ and blogs about Holmes and related stuff at Almost Holmes.